Sunlight in the Clouds

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Sunlight in the Clouds

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Author Comments

Thanks for listening,
Please also find some of my written music at (natedoodles dot blogspot dot com)

Cheers,
Nate

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stunkel

2012-09-29 14:15:26

This song needs some work. It seems very out of sync. I can hear some of the ideas that you put into the song, which are very good, but they could be executed a little better. Did you record this? or was it done in a DAW? I think this song would be really great if it had a better structure and was cleaned up much more. Try and fix that stuff up and you will be set I think.

ogbonna responds:

Hi Stunkel,
Thanks for your review. I will work on the structure some more. I used both recording and DAW.
Cheers,
Nate