uhh what is happening inside my brain right now

ok so my computer is acting weird and i don't know if the stars are going to show up so ill type it to be sure. 3 stars.
i commend you for successfully creating an acutate remake of song of storms. here are some things i found wrong with the song. 1, it sounded clippy like you made it on your computer but either recorded with the volume to high or physically recorded it with a bad quality recorder. 2, yes it's 8-bit but just because its 8-bit doesn't mean it has to be bland and plain. anybody could make an 8-bit version of any song with a little bit of musical knowlege and the right supplies. what everyone can't do is be you. you have to make this song personal and use your creativity and your opinion to make this 8-bit remake your remake because honestly you can probably you tube it and record it and call it your own (not saying you did). all other music producers can look at this and say "so what you can find the notes and place them in the right spot but that doesn't mean he has talent" but here is my question. do you have talent? i'm not trying to be rude i'm just being realistic.