Thanks for appreciating the beat. The lyrical content of the vocals is fine. I feel they are unclear but that's because of the delay you are using. While it works here maybe up that predelay so that the vocals themselves are more clear before the echo kicks in. You gotta turn the vocals up a bit too in the mix. Most of the issues are from the recording equipment so under the circumstances its quite good. The EQ ing is fine. Other than that, I like it. You could have asked for a longer version lol.