Good quality
So you really know how to use your stuff here, the one thing i noticed is that the sound was of good quality very sharp and crisp sounds and thats one of the more important things, as for the tune, it has a cute sense to it then goes off into some grovy flow of stuff, so i was pretty impressed with what you had here, and would recomend this to most people with simular interests, so nice job and efforts here, keep up the fantastic work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm with this one i believe you have covered all the basics, maybe push the sounds so that you have more changes and more variarty here and there would be a nice touch.