Do you know how to....
Keep a beat and make the timeing right because this is jsut out of beat and the timeing is off by a ton..
Make a song That actualy sounds rite like if you put this altogether right youed have a great song but its just random stuff ;P Like and is dosent even go alltogether. its off beat and its not with the main beat like its all out of place.
KEEP TRYING.
Lol Dont get mad at my review i m jsut trying to give you sum advice like if it was put together good you would have a good song.