Here you go. I did promise, though I'm a little late... my bad for that.

THE GOOD:
-The intro sounds pretty darn awesome. I love the sweeping sound you used, and the pads were also pretty nice.
-The main tune is also fairly good.
-Break at 1:30. Yes. Just yes.
-The effect at 1:44 is also really great.

THE NOT-SO-GOOD:
-At about 0:45 and 0:55, I didn't particularly like how the tune just vanished and then appeared again, it definitely felt like something was missing when that hit.
-When the instrument comes in at 1:15 along with the louder cymbal, the entire mix gets a bit too loud - it's hard to make out the other instruments without trying fairly hard. Not a good thing.
-Throughout the entire thing, there's only really one chord sequence, it would have been nice if that were varied.
-Along with the chords' lack of variation, the same can also be said for the melody. It would make this song a LOT better to have at least two different melodies so that there can be more of a 'B section'. Variation is a good thing.

Overall:
I love the instruments, the pads, the effects you had used, it sounds really cool. My main issue with this song is the lack of variation, making it kind of just sit there and feel meh. Really the best way I can put it. If you added in just a little more variation, though, this would be really cool.

-Swint

Your first track on NG?
cool. It's very nice. Especially the lead synth, I got all kinds of down to that. The chord progress was no less awesome.
The first track I uploaded was kind of similar to this one, check it out if you want to :P