Nice, needs a bit of work
ok, I think I know what you're trying to achieve here, but I think if you're trying to express yourself emotionally, you need to cut back on the extra snare hits and that strange kick drum sound.
Take it back to basics, maybe a kind of Moby style drum loop would work better with the piano and strings you have going?
Remember, keep it simple! just sounds like you're going for a bit too much.
Also, with the strings, bring them in later to give the track a bit more of a sense of building up. The piano needs to be developed first in my opinion. The strings sound a little bit distorted sometimes btw, some compression issues? Be careful not to overcompress the track.
Overall, a good track, but maybe rethink it a little.