The distorted bass is way too high in the mix when the song starts and clearly mellows out around 15 seconds or so. Later on I think the strings get too high in the mix and the bass and beat get drowned out too much. General mixing problems that could easily be fixed are prevalent throughout the song it needs to blend and bleed together better. Otherwise I thought this was a pretty decent entry I like the orchestral feel the song kept throughout it gave your work a sense of majesty as background strings often do. Not bad, man just iron out the mix.