Well not bad, but its repetitive! Yuore boring us (ZzZzZzZzZ) Try to make some other parts, chorus, drops, verses, or anything else, but dont do it repetitive. :/ Also the drums werent so good at all, there arent variations at all, just a little, and they are too low on volume, keep an eye (or an ear :P) on your mixing, you can make the song of the year, but if the volume control isnt good, it wont be great, just cause of that!!!. But i liked the effects and sfx you put to it, thats one point for you! I dont say this is making me cry, i liked it! Kepp your work, you have a great talent, learn how to use it! :D