Hey buddy, thanks for uploading.
I really liked the intro. It's dark atmosphere was really working for me, but then the synths went just a little off-key before they dropped out. The composition is actually really well worked, with just enough dynamic to keep it interesting rather than just repeating everything. The layers built up over time, which would work really well on a horror game backdrop. It's a great track for an in-game loop, but there are a few inconsistencies on the final mix; Volume differences, synths over-powering a little when they jump in... and the drums are just a little too quiet.
Still, good work, and above a well above average effort. (I scored you a 3 1/2 out of 5, based on the quality of your best track.)