Hey...this is my first track posted on here!
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=a_TogdPwPXQ
The YouTube version has a little video of me rapping while driving...nothing really fancy at all. I just want feedback on how it sounds. I know that the flow is a little forced sometimes, and i should have cut back on a couple of syllables, but whatever. Tell me what i need to do to get better! :D