USE SOME EFFECTS!

I can definately tell this is Fruity loops work... I'm sorry but this song reminds me of when I first started out with Fruity Loops 3... This is too basic son... take some tutorials in the software man... learn how to add effects and do more than just put in a sample...

Go to my profile and listen to a few of my tracks. All of which were produced in Fruityloops 3- FL Studio 5

It might give you some ideas... but from now on learn how to turn everything inside out.