The style requires an open mind

I positivly love it! You could have done with out the tamal tho... next time make your own drum beat, try to make it kind of funky because it seems like thats the direction your headed. btw i dont know if its just coincidence but your name is curioseidiot (reference to curiose george {A monkey}) the song name is the monkey mix, and what ever instrument you used for the melody is the same instrument used in Ape escape for PS1 on most of its songs... lol so 5/5 from me and hopefully i can get you to Private message me and explain that weird set of circumstances lolololololololololololololololololol ololol

Yep

It's a little random.

Take it back to basics. The bass and the beats are pretty solid. But all that random synth work on top just pretty much ruins all your good work with the bass and beats.

Strip it down and rethink it.