Well, it's been a while since I've been on here. Someone made their way onto my music page, and messed up all my scores. And with my current work going into trying to get into accounting school, it's been hard to find time to make music. I've been working out a kick, and I was playing with Zebra 2 last time I touched FL, a few weeks ago.
It was good, but as far as your work goes, this wasn't your best. It was awesome production wise. Your audio quality is phenominal.
The main melody was a touch underwhelming. Every song is a story, to me. And this story feels like it lacks a powerful developement. The magic you were trying to show me, as it was, wasn't as magical as it could have been. But then, that's my opinion, and that doesn't mean much as far as production goes. It only means that Come On is still my favorite track by you.
The transition from intro to melody was smooth, but it feels like it should have been sharper.
Other than that, good job. Another solid to add to your library.