The song is really catchy :) and the lyrics are great, really moving :) The best advice I can give or suggestion I can make is that open it up a little and maybe intensify it a bit. The reason why is because I can totally see myself getting lost in this song when at a nightclub but there isn't a huge build for me to be like "OMG HERE IT COMES......BAM!" but anyways keep up the good work. You get 5 from me :)