Splendid track. Lots of goodies in this one.

The only thing I can point out is the lack of any solid progression. Pendulum for example tends to have several increments of progression in a lot of their tracks. Some are more dynamic and instant, twisting from point a to z with so many interesting stops along the way. And there are some which have a little less progression (but nonetheless is existant, e.g. Slam, Plasticworld - this has a bit of a swinging progression between two rhythmic melodies).

I've found that a lot of your songs don't really have that progression, which is a little awkward as there seems to be a need for my ears to have that sort of eclectic diversity. Maybe I alone suffer this as a listener- but especially in drum and bass this is a must for me.

I think one of your staple progression tracks is visor - last words (Which, to this day, I think is an epic piece. Truly fantastic). I'd strongly recommend revisiting that piece.

Keep up the goodness,
-CO

the beat at the beginning reminds me of phace's drum style. I'd see a bit more of overdrived & equalized elements and it would be more evil! Other than that it's a solid track. Good job man, sounds like you're getting better! :)

feel free to hit me up for tips, i generally do music when i'm on my spare time. I may help you raising the bar to the neuroshpere standard... depends on you! :p

That sub-bass.

Great.

You could do another mix of this and it would work as drumfunk, too. :P

I'm sure you'll get into the show. Or else I'll go over there and make them.

Im on the moon, as a robot probe to search fo water, i expect no resistance from this dreadfull rock but ninjas poor out of the no atmosphere, and start hurling moon rocks at me, clink clink, my skintanium armour repels the blast of the rocks hitting my skintanium armour, i react violently, even though its against my programming and hit them back with pikachus elecrto shock, he calls his next moonimon, i use a super potion so my skintanium armour gber ets all th scratches off it than when he sends out paris hilton i use my jaberwawkee paparazzi slam, sending her sex videos into cyber space, I win and sample the rocks from the moon, vibrant as they are they contain no water just swiis cheese, and reply we are the swiss several times on national tv, ownz

10/10 kepe up the moon!