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Back when, Now named "Burn The Clouds" will be completed as a collaboration between me and MrFijiWiji and will be sold via MonsterCat, so look out for that!

This is actually what i was using to experiment with Eq and mastering technics while watching youtube tutorials. Turned out pretty good if you ask me! I am planning to finish this as a full track.

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Too shoooooooooooooooort !!!

I love your songs !

Unique sounds

And once again i have come across a nicr track here, cant say its perfect but it has some good points about that and for any bad points well all that can be fixed up and improved but as for this i like what you have started here. I really like what you did here with the "ECHO" it was a nice effect that i think you could really use more of at times, The drums came into effect just at the right time, making for a great combo effect with other effects so nice job there, There was some good bass also. So with the whole tune in my head it was a good reliefe to finally finish it, i was generall pleased with this, right from the start with some good effects and a good touch of skills put into this and cant wait for more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Decent music submission here i was really taken back by all the differant sounds and how you made it all come together, there could be some extra improvments to make it even better, they are just some ideas but your music track is pretty good as is. I thought for some improving points maybe add more effects, maybe more mixes and differant sounds would be a nice unique change to this and ofcourse more build up with the echo effect you already have in here.

Very nicely made song indeed. It is something that can really calm me down after a hard day, and has a nice ring to it. You can really tell that there was a lot of effort put into this, as it is not only a very nice beat, it is also long enough to not leave me wanting more.

I can't really say that I have any complaints for this particular piece, as everything just seems to flow together so nicely. The ending bit was my favorite due to the slow end to the pace, and you did very well with the drop off for the finish. While I can't honestly say that it was good for repeating, it is still an altogether great piece of music.

You could have sped the song up a little more during the middle to give it a more electric feel, despite the fact that it has done well without. That is more something just from my personal perspective. As I said before, the fade out during the end was the best part of it.

-Review Request Club-

Nice work. It's only a shame that this is really a work in progress, as opposed to a finished piece, if I'm honest. The deeper "counter-beat" that you've thrown in there seems unnecessary and unwieldy, going against the grain that the rest of the track seems to form. Perhaps it's the third of the beats that you threw in with them that I disliked, but it needs something to work for it.

At only 2 minutes long, you could stand to make it longer, especially because of how the introduction takes place, building up from quiet to loud. That compromises the looping behaviour, as you don't suddenly think that you've been listening to this track for a long time and realise that it's looping, you realise that you've listened to the same track over and over again.

Some "other solo" could be employed, where an instrument other than the main synths that you've chosen here are deployed, to give something different to the piece and really carry it off to the next level. I'll be happy to review this when you're finished and published the finished article.

[Review Request Club]

This has a solid rhythm and a soft dancing styled beat to it. When it starts out the echo drums seem a tiny bit unneeded to me but if it is meant to build up to something later in the song then that would be nice and I notice after about twenty seconds that the echo drums get lighter and lighter in sound which is pretty nice.

The synth runs smoothly onto the next note and keeps on going strong here giving a slight feeling of being out on the dance floor and just having a good time. The drum and clap combination also works wonders and seems to give motivation to clap along to the beat while moving to the rhythm on the dance floor at the same time. The lighthearted feel of the synth though is very smooth and slightly reminds me of Daft Punk too.

The bass has that funky backdrop feel as it it was giving you motivation the whole time to keep on going but you never knew it was there unless listening to it closely.

Overall, great work in progress so far. Only recommendation is to lose the echo drums at the start of the song unless they are building up to something. Aside from that, sounds excellent to me. Don't have to remove them if you don't wish to, I just feel it might sound better without them. Can't wait to see the full piece!

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Uploaded
Mar 5, 2012
10:15 PM EST
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House
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1 min 49 sec

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