I think this song is just great, No, amazing!
I Love the feeling that this song brings to me. I like how you flow everything together. I was disapointed that you never finished this peice. It could be a great work. I would highly encourage you to finish. Just so that it dosent cut off like it does. Even if where just slightley longer that would be nice. I totaly give you props though for what you have completed.
I want to let you know that i listen to this song almost every day. There is something abot this song that encourages me to just press on through whatever im going through.
You make some really great peices of music. So dont stop what you are doing.