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Procrastinating on stuff - made this song. Listen/vote/comment plz and thx
First of all, I think you could use a heavier kick. The one you have now is too weak. The mix also needs some work, it's hard to hear all the elements of the track play at the same time. It sounds as if they're fighting with each other to be heard. Try cutting the clashing frequencies in some sounds to get rid of this problem. That way everything will sit in the mix and be clear.
Had a nice pattern with the saw(ish) sound, but I thought it needed a bit more. Try adding a bass, some chords, pads, maybe an arp and general SFX to give the track some character.
And procrastination. FUCK THAT hahaha. It's a nice listen man! 4/5 8/10 :D
I personally was waiting for more of a melody to kick in, so I was a little disappointed when it didn't. Maybe try adding a different instrument for the lead and use the current for an intro. Just a suggestion.
thanks for the input! not a bad idea
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