Uhm...

Your missing alot of elements to make this a trance song...
Also the melody is repeating itself too soon over and over, there is no change in the song, well not much....

I would like to make a song with you though. :)
Send me a PM if you want to :) Or reply my Review lol.

I give this a 3 out of 10...
This is not Trance or is but not enough stuff in it.

Grtz ID

Not that catchy

I had the feeling you had quite the nice instruments, but didn't use them well. I didn't notice the strings only on the end where they were the only thing playing. It's rather boring to have the same piano loop playing over and over, though the piano-loop-thing wasn't too bad, I'd suggest try making two or three loops that fit with each other and try to have them blend in to eachother to make the song more interesting.

1/5
3/10

Peace