Simple and elegant.

I would really like to see you rerecord this and make it even better.
In one part from 0:34 to 0:36, it sounds a little odd. You may want to look into that.
I like how you came in with the choir-like part midway. Although you may want a smoother transition into it.
Overall a great piece.

-HFX ^_^

good stuff

I was sitting in suspense, hoping that you wouldn't hit that last note... hoping you would leave it be on that beautiful third, letting the song end in somewhat-incomplete perfection... and then you hit it! Aaargh!
Great work, overall, though. It's also nice to hear something hand-played; it's almost a lost art here on NG... The production leaves a little to be desired, but I've never been one to let production interfere with music appreciation.
5/5

Loved it...

well played CutMan, well played.

I've just recently put my old mouse to rest. I make all my music with that one single mouse, and my crapium comp.

It sounds silly, but that mouse let me give birth to some pretty impressive tunes (or at least I like to think so >_>). So when I listened to this piece, I imagined holding up this dirty old mouse, high up to the sky, letting it soak in the light one last time, before I buried it, making it one with the earth it came from.

I miss that crinkly click sound... *sniff*

5/5 from CutMan16 (for future reference, pieces like this should go to classical ^^)