This is good stuff
This is good. An overly obnoxious anime voice wouldn't have worked as well as this.
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Alternate Title: Coma, Coma, Coma
Written By: Hnilmik
Entry for Osuka's Ngfigure Voice Acting Contest
http://www.newgrounds.com /bbs/topic/1275545/
=== SCRIPT ===
Hello everyone~ Or rather... M'blog. Sorry for neglecting you. I've been really... Busy. You know, being a high schooler during the day and... Can you keep a secret? Um... Let's... Let's see if I can private this--There we are! Okay! I've been giving people comas!
Really! It's amazing what you can do on the 'net these days and you wouldn't think I'd be behind it huh?
ESPECIALLY this one guy I've been crushing on... See, I wanted to be closer to him. So I played the games he played, to get to know him better out of the classroom. Needless to say, I got REALLY good at this one MMO.
But he didn't give a hoot. Seriously! I would be all "Hey, you know about the whole immersion thing they've been doing? It'll be like we're in the game! Virtual reality, whoa!"
And he'd be all.. [murr whurruver murn] Yeah, that's my impression of him. SUE ME.
So I had to take it up a notch. Became an evil mastermind in-game. No big deal.
Then I found a way to put people into a coma. Then it became a BIG deal.
International news. Sure, I became evil, but he began MEDDLING! He began TALKING TO ME! MY EVIL ALTER EGO! It was romantic! STAR. CROSSED. LOVERS...!!
"Aren't you afraid of getting a coma from that game?..!"
[mrraaahhh]
"You're so brave...!"
[whoaever did that must suck]
"That's... Nice!"
You'd think he'd talk more IRL...! So I gave HIM a coma and everyone with a 3 in their name!
Wait, is this an email from him--? Did he just ask me out...?! BUT I JUST--
Good voice
it almost match with the character.
Cute voice
~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was pretty good you really do put your emotion into it, and its actually very good and reminds of of watching an anime cartoon so if that was the idea great job, could be somewhat longer maybe even changing up things like if your mad, silly and really happy even some sad moments but thats just me, but anyways great piece here i enjoyed it, it was a great test for people to see and use your voices, anyways nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some other moments you could put out there just an idea.
Hnilmik responds:
Thanks for taking the time to write up a review~
This entry was for a contest, with rules being to interpret and stay in character based on the images provided, so I'm actually glad that this made you think of an anime! Riley's character image featured an anime character and though I could've used a more obnoxiously anime voice, I chose to be more creative with my entry. Looks like it still got perceived as an anime either way though!
Trust me, I would've done WAAAYYY more, but entries had to be 45 seconds to 2 minutes, so this was all I could fit in within the time limit. Had to cut out a lot of extra gags and emotional shifts. Maybe an extended version someday~?
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