its decent
like the guy below me its missing a few things... my suggestion IF you plan on remaking this... add some claping... trust me... and maybe some bass also for the clapping when it starts building up there add clapping at somewhere at 2:47-49 is where the clapping should start to build up that suspense not like scary suspens but suspense for when the bass would start to pound in ya know... give that UH! feel ya know.... you got the potential but dont stall out on all the sounds.. in anycase good work