Mello.....

I disagree totally w/ everyone else. I like the sound. Keepem' coming !

Meh

Your beats are a little off and the quality makes me think of something recorded with a walmart mic. You need to clean up big-time, mate.

Oh, i don't know...

Seems pretty boring to me...
More like trance than techno.
Ya need to gear it up!

Quality problems...

There is definately quality problems with this. It needs a little work in EQing I think. In saying that though, it was pretty good beat. That... clap that's taking place of the snare needs to be removed, coz its annoying. It really takes a lot of potential out of the track.
Keep working on it, and I'll give it a 9 :)

needs work

Its a nice idea but the thing needs to be cleaned up and added too. Sounds like a bad amp speaker in some parts try to fix that. Keep working