NGF11-NG Elite Audition

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NGF11-NG Elite Audition

Author Comments

This is my demo for NG Elite... and I'm pretty sure it sucks. I've said some of the stupidest things in this... Basically a bunch of little lines I made up for him. I have almost no idea how he's supposed to act, so I sort of made something up... ugh... and my microphone sucks. But by the end of the month I should have a nice one.

Enjoy... and if you think it sucks as well, at least review it and tell me why, thanks...

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SirKillington

2011-12-10 15:42:51

Ergh

I really like the fact this is in the format of quotes and not a scene. I think your mic or filter sounds a little boxy tho. Also your pops and 'S' are coming in a little too prominent because you might be too close to the mic. It also seems like your trying to be quite at certain parts so let it fly! I like the voice because it seems really cocky, I think if ya did a 'superhero' version of the elite it might be kinda cool. Good job!

Twisted4000 responds:

Thanks for the detailed review. Like I said, my microphone sucks. It's actually like 2 feet away from my mouth. It's just fuzzy. But don't worry, by the end of the month I should have a good microphone with a pop filter.

Thanks for listening!

AReviewer

2011-12-10 00:31:13

Hmm

I hope that isn't your normal voice because you sound like a douchebag. Otherwise its great for a character's voice in a Flash. Work on keeping your voice deep, because 'elite' and 'dead' sound ridiculous.

Twisted4000 responds:

Lol no that's not my normal voice... sorry about the "elite" and "dead" parts, lol, but I was kinda going for a ridiculous sort of voice right there just to try something new, but I now see its feedback and I won't do that anymore.