I like the concept

this song has alot of potential. Changing the scale mid song on that saw was not so good though. the saw at the start, and the synth at the end were sick but that change of scale killed it.

add a compressor to those drums too.

don't take this as a bad review, i don't usually review peoples songs. I liked it.

Heh

I saw this when it was sumbitted and didnt review it, then i heard the song God is a Girl by Groove coverage and i can see where the melody came from..the first one anyway...the 2nd out of tune one blows..no offence.

Not bad, but could be improved

It's not bad, but not great, you should try adding a bass and better beat to go with the really good melody (specifically the first melody). 3/5 from me.