Twas ok..

I am not all that impressed, it sounds like you don't put enough effort into your songs... It makes me sad really, I think you have some talent, this one left me thinking you just made a simple beat, and slapped an effect on it.. Try again, use more than just 2 instruments please, throw some variety in there.. Also the ending does not suit the song at all, it just ends, stops in mid-stride. GoodLuck with future attempts.