Feels like, as it is stated, the beginning.
This definitely needs something to follow it. It feels as if it's lacking a climax. Otherwise VERY good.
if you want to use it,ask me first and reviews of any kind are accepted :3
Feels like, as it is stated, the beginning.
This definitely needs something to follow it. It feels as if it's lacking a climax. Otherwise VERY good.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.