Hey guys
Please review my song!
It's very funky, and got a guitar like "twang twang twang".
It's got the bass like "boom boom pow".
It's got that, you know, thing with the noise that goes "chkachkachkachka", like that.
And stuff.
I hope you like my arrangement of sounds put together to please the ear.
If the sounds go well to your ear, let me know!
If the sounds don't go well to your ear, let me know!
If you don't care about the sounds, let me know!
If you get bored, skip to 2:10. There's a cool part there that's like "wee wee wee wee".
It's got a kind of disco vibe to it. So vibe disco, you know what I mean?
Benjamin Jones
(zigZAG)
first thing is the
intro seems a bit glitchy like it just loops over agen o.o
yeaaa 100 im getting pretty bored
around 200 i like the new change but yea
the only thing i can think of is reallyyy old pop music from this XD 2 30 has some hope that its going to turn in to awesomeness :D
yeaaa i like this part better thin the start
I'm Sure that they call that bepop don't they?
Anyhow the thing that plays at 2:24 should be played earlier and I think you could make this better by slowing it down (the tempo is good btw just too fast) and fading the song down/up to emphasis your favourite parts (too make it less repetitive)
I'm downloading it right now
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
xxxZigZagxxx 
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