Very good, a lot of mixing problems.

I like the way you compose. It's very nice. It needs a bit of mastering, to eliminate the distortion. What program do you use? You can send files to me, and I'll try to mix them accordingly to sound clean and crisp :) Because the melodies are very nice

Benny

It has potential..

With some refining, this could be a fine song. Just not as it is.