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Halindir - October Winds

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Floating into october

Comments would be appreciated.
Enjoy :)

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Nice!

I like the different melodies and chords used in this piece, especially how it changes in the end of the second minute. What I think could be improved is, that you try to add more structure and variation into the whole song. I have the feeling that everything runs always in the same rythm like: ||.ii.ii.||.ii.ii.||.ii.ii.||.ii.ii.
Try to take out one of the instruments at a few points to make the song more interesting and adventurous like (for example): ||.ii.ii.i.ii.ii.i.ii.ii.||.ii.ii.
I know it's a bit hard to show but I hope you get what I mean, the instruments do not have to always play in the same rythm as long as your song is. The rest is really nice, keep it up! :)
8/10 | 4/5

Halindir responds:

Thank you very much T-Free!
Took some time to decipher what you meant, but I think I get it.

You feedback is appreciated :)

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Sep 30, 2011
4:16 PM EDT
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2.3 MB
2 min 34 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.