Flootershy!!

Oh my this sounds marvelous. Not too bad for a first song either and I like it a lot too. The tune makes me think of Fluttershy if she had been modeling clothes before Luna was sent to the moon after being corrupted by jealousy and possibly Discord as well. Very nice beat.

The trumpets give a feel of her making a heavily dramatic entrance here and that she is loved by all the ponies as well including those that think she is a bit off for a model too. The bass piano note give a feel of her just wishing she could leave as well and just wants to head home to tend to what she loves...animals.

The very light secondary sounding piano gives a feel of her simply modeling and trying to act like she likes even though she is only doing it as Rarity asked.

Overall, very calming and peaceful song.

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Not bad!

Composition wise this is not bad at all, and for your first song... wow dude, really amazing work! :D

This is is a great sound for just starting out, and I'm sure that as you get the hang of music writing programs you will excel quite quickly :)

The melodies and composition are great, but I would have liked to hear a bit more on the bass end of the sound spectrum :p. The samples chosen here... work... but they could definitely be better. Most of the actual samples used here are rather loq quality sounding, and really basic; you managed to get the point across, but if you really want to grab peoples attention you have to put just as much time into creating your sounds as you do composing complex melodies.

Friendly suggestions:
- Look into some new plugins, and look up some tutorials on creating original sounds
- Add some percussive elements to this
- Add some reverb to those "real" samples to get an even more real sound from them

Overall not bad for a first submission!
~Dj Sonik

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