strong mood, average delivery

Can definitely feel what you're aiming for, the structure and mood is strong. If you're going to add those set pace drums though maybe also add something kind of eerie to take away from the piano's largesse only because it gets done a lot. But, very workable, very usable and moderate in quality for what you're putting together :) nice.

Improvement Huh?

My improvement is strictly subjective so if you're not agreeing, it totally cool.

IMO, I think that you should scrap the drum. Play the piano 50% slower. At the start of the music, I think you should just play the windy background for like 5 seconds before you set in the piano, for a slow climbing ambient music. Then at the end of the music, the piano stops, leaving only the windy background to play before the whole thing start back to form a loop.

But all in all, this piece can still hold its own. Not an award winner, but doesn't bleed the ear either.

Vote 3, U mad bro?