Sounds more like trance, but...Great!

First off, start the beats faster. Usually in DnB songs you have a constant Drum loops of hard sound being played regardless of whether there's a melody or not. Another thing you might consider is experimenting with real drum samples. DnB is played at at high volume with lots of snares and hi-hats at a fast pace. Don't be afraid to use the piano role on Drums instead of the drum layout. Trust me, it only gets better with time.

Other than that, we should talk more about the 3osc sometime, but for now...
not bad! I look forward to hearing more from you, Keat.