WOW

it makes me feel fit in, I am not the only one out here sad so hear me out and get a myspac so maybe I can use this as the song I put on my profile if I get that sad, and nice with the Legend of Zelda typish thing

hi im not sayin your name its too long

hi hi

this is one of my favorite songs written by you.

this is one of my favorite songs written by you.

It has the potential now go exploit it!

the song has a calm and depressed core to it Raust, and right away you establish a mood that you carry throughout the whole piece effectively.

This is no small accomplishment.

The song does however get a fair bit repetitive Raust. I believe you have this amazing melody, but you could build up on it so much you know, as it stands it is this neat piano riff, with a flute that plays the same melody, and some neat strings.

Have you considered percussional instruments such as the triangle? I feel the triangle, if used at transition points, would REALLY make the song more powerful you know.

Also, have you considered playing a violin melody on top of the piano, an octave higher, to make another soft melody? I can hear some very very intense possibilities.

What I am trying to say here Raust is, you have a very solid foundation here, and i've said it before, I wish to say it again, you remind me of myself in earlier times. I believe you can eventually create much more powerful things then myself. You have the ear, I would like to see you take some more time with the pieces you present, they all have a load of potential I am not seeing you exploit.

If you let me, I will take this song, and add my own layers to it, to show you what I mean ^^.

Email me at full_metal_slashemist@hotmail.com, I hope to hear from you soon.

5/5 from me this time Raust, because I can hear the potential, and the direction you are taking. Keep them coming.