Score: 9
"It has the potential now go exploit it!"
date: March 5, 2006
the song has a calm and depressed core to it Raust, and right away you establish a mood that you carry throughout the whole piece effectively.
This is no small accomplishment.
The song does however get a fair bit repetitive Raust. I believe you have this amazing melody, but you could build up on it so much you know, as it stands it is this neat piano riff, with a flute that plays the same melody, and some neat strings.
Have you considered percussional instruments such as the triangle? I feel the triangle, if used at transition points, would REALLY make the song more powerful you know.
Also, have you considered playing a violin melody on top of the piano, an octave higher, to make another soft melody? I can hear some very very intense possibilities.
What I am trying to say here Raust is, you have a very solid foundation here, and i've said it before, I wish to say it again, you remind me of myself in earlier times. I believe you can eventually create much more powerful things then myself. You have the ear, I would like to see you take some more time with the pieces you present, they all have a load of potential I am not seeing you exploit.
If you let me, I will take this song, and add my own layers to it, to show you what I mean ^^.
Email me at full_metal_slashemist@hotmail.com, I hope to hear from you soon.
5/5 from me this time Raust, because I can hear the potential, and the direction you are taking. Keep them coming.
Author's Response:
remix my song? it would be an honor- go right ahead!