i would rather

lie in this song that listen to broken glass. This was jammin pretty nice at a bunch of parts. Took a little while to get up though... i would recommend balancing out the points of interest, have some long sweeps and more anticipation built in- make us want the climax. also, once the climax did hit, i was a bit disappointed in the preset sound pallet, i guess it was only the drums is where i had trouble.

anyways, my point is this song is good, but it has the building blocks for something even greater! i'd say replace some drums (and that one crash instrument >.<) drop the bass and have some more fun with it.

4/5