Okay
The idea and atmosphere is good but it's a bit low in production quality and arrangement. You should add more energy to breaks thus making them more flowing. Keep it up tho! :)
This is my second full composition made with GarageBand. I made this close to six months after Fallen Star, so I was a little bit out of practice, but it didn't turn out too bad, just a little harmony issues here and there.
Okay
The idea and atmosphere is good but it's a bit low in production quality and arrangement. You should add more energy to breaks thus making them more flowing. Keep it up tho! :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.