ok!

That was cool, you got the drums right it seems, the other sounds not so much! By the sound of it, you had attack time up a little and release time all the way down, so we get a distracting cut after each note. I'd suggest either giving it some release time, or taking away the attack time. I hope you know what I'm talking about, or rather I assume you do. Also, try adding in one more instrument, or I guess call it channel. But make it something 'sine'-ish, quiet, and faster paced, moving freely from treble to bass.

I know how it feels to not get reviews, hang in there!
+*. Special Ed .*+