Very simple blues idea. It needs a riff, like "Baby Please Don't Go", which I'll work on. Came to me in a dream which had, of all things, a soundtrack like "2000 Light-years from home", which proved too difficult for me at this stage. Don't judge it too harshly. What I'm really trying to do is introduce a contrary rhyming reframe over the traditional form. By the way, this has been updated. Some wheezes, that were birds I think, I didn't like. Old one still available if needs be.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.