You just didn't have the tone she had in the original. I got the feeling you were angry in this, whereas in the original she sounded more desperate. Although that might just be the transition from female singer to male. All in all, not too bad.
Composed by Hania Lee, performed by Brothers Immortal as an entry to the contest she put on. We love a lot of her music and were eager for the chance to put our own twist on one of her songs.
You just didn't have the tone she had in the original. I got the feeling you were angry in this, whereas in the original she sounded more desperate. Although that might just be the transition from female singer to male. All in all, not too bad.
i feel like if you used that megaphone sound on the beggining it would be good
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.