yea....

you could leave it as a loop or just add atleast an instrument in there......and Zips idea seems pretty solid too...if you put your mind to it you could just through yourself a party......if you fail just curl up in a cornor and think about what you did wrong-_-.....nice work though :))

Hmm...

I think I understand why you're having such trouble finishing it. I mean, this loop sounds perfect as it is. Expanding on it may be a little difficult since you've got some pretty solid stuff going on already. Perhaps a tiny bit more emphasis on the bassline, with like a new melody that is a deep bass. Or maybe harmonizing the main melody. Idk...seems tough to progress :c