A new version of my Cover of Death Cab For Cutie's "I'll follow you into the Dark"

So I took the comments and my own sensibilities into account and realized a few things needed to be fixed with this cover. The vocals, while not perfect, have been smoothed out and shouldn't sound so messed up. I also changed and added an instrument or two. All in all I'm much more happy with having this instead. Unfortunately newgrounds won't let me delete the old one, so it's there for comparison. Enjoy. All instruments and vocals done by me and recorded in real time.

Lyrics
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Love of mine some day you will die
But I'll be close behind
I'll follow you into the dark

No blinding light or tunnels to gates of white
Just our hands clasped so tight
Waiting for the hint of a spark
If Heaven and Hell decide
That they both are satisfied
Illuminate the NOs on their vacancy signs

If there's no one beside you
When your soul embarks
Then I'll follow you into the dark

In Catholic school as vicious as Roman rule
I got my knuckles bruised by a lady in black
And I held my tongue as she told me
"Son fear is the heart of love"
So I never went back

If Heaven and Hell decide
That they both are satisfied
Illuminate the NOs on their vacancy signs

If there's no one beside you
When your soul embarks
Then I'll follow you into the dark

You and me have seen everything to see
From Bangkok to Calgary
And the soles of your shoes are all worn down
The time for sleep is now
It's nothing to cry about
'cause we'll hold each other soon
In the blackest of rooms

If Heaven and Hell decide
That they both are satisfied
Illuminate the No's on their vacancy signs

If there's no one beside you
When your soul embarks
Then I'll follow you into the dark
Then I'll follow you into the dark