FIVED!

WOW! Just...WOW!

This is so creative! You've so many things going on at ~1:20 and it sounds soooo good! Nice dance track man! OH, and nice snare too :) hahaha, used to be my favourite in the VEC03 pack.

A couple of things:
Drop the chorus and see how it sounds, may or may not work.
Add a distorted bassline
Add an electro bass

Those are things this song could benefit from, but all aside, this is amazing!

Your best yet ScionForge :D 9/10 5/5 Keep it up broski. :)