Respect
You have some awesome things going for you. This is really good, your lyrics are spot on, you have good musical production, and you have flow.
Put more up. This shit is good.
Firs Chaptah is a new up coming hip-hop artist from Tampa, FL who lyrics are really something to talk about. This song is featuring J'Aura also a Tampa resident. He is also on 2 other song on the NEON CITY mixtape. Look out for it SOON!
Respect
You have some awesome things going for you. This is really good, your lyrics are spot on, you have good musical production, and you have flow.
Put more up. This shit is good.
Good
Man, I like this, but I'm so sick of the "electro-piano-drum" sound, it feels hollow, new Drake, "Headlines" has it and I know you're not trying to be Boi-1da on this track. New kit, real drummer, something...even the new Obie Trice joint, "Battle Cry" has real drum sounds! Obie...Trice. Just my thoughts. That "electro-piano-drum" kit sound probably sells and I suppose that's all that matters. Production is tight aside from that tangent I went on. I dig the horn stabs and the glitchy synth in the chorus.
You have skills.
Flow is sick, and the delivery is very on-point. Chorus is pretty good.
thanks bro
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.