Technically fine

Ok, I will be honest. I didn't feel anything when I listened to it.
You did a great job with your software but you did too much technical maybe. It's like a violin student in his first year who performs a song. He performs it well enough technically speaking but he can't yet bring any feeling into it.
Music is like emotion. It must be profund, deep, powerful.
So technically speaking your work is just fine. But it reminds me when I began to compose loops. I wasn't composing musics, I was trying to master the software. And I think you are trying to master the software too.
But it's important to be able to know the software, it's the basis. Once you know how it works you can then try to bring feelings into it.

Try to use different sort of loops, instead of using the same parts again and again. For me your song looks like a battle of samples/loops with zero building plan. Your hihats and your synth are sometime out of tempo and you must avoid this! Then come your kicks; the sound of the kick could be a bit more punchy I think but sounds fine.

This is not a bad review. I just make you aware of some important things. Take your time to build your song with real distinctive part. Like something which changes everything and something which is the same thing everyting.
Or if you want to work with progressive music, try to begin from a loop and to add more and more loops. But the whole must be full of emotions.

Now you know a little bit more how to use your software try to compose with your heart and not with your brain. I'm sure you can do it. I did, it tooks me 5 years to build my own style so you can do it.

Stay tuned.
Mister M.