The Hell?

Man,i don't know what to say,it's funny,but it's also depressing(of course,if you did have AIDZ).i really like the beat,and the lyrics..i'll get to them later.the verses tell a story,like any rap does,and i like it.a lot. the chorus is a bit repeated though.

The song structure is very generic,but for a song like this,it works well.maybe you should've added a breakdown? i think the song would've been a bit a better instead of a double chorus at the end.i think if you kept the double chorus(this isn't recommended though) you should have a key change up or down a major second,whichever you might like.

the person who made the beat has a creative mind,using the instruments to the advantage of the rapper,inculding that rocky organ and the russian style acoustic guitar rhythm.

overall,it's a great song.you seem to work VERY quickly since there are already five raps above this,which is good.practice makes perfect.

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Saddening

I guess it must be sad for anyone once they discover they have AIDS as they no they have a limited time left to live after a couple of years. I guess it goes to show you should be cautious with who you have sex with as well. The lyrics just sound really sad.

The slight violin reminds me of Donkey Kong Country and Silent Hill actually, cool. The piano makes this piece sound really sad and bad too as if it was the last song the person would ever write. The bass and drums are a good combo on this one as they help finish and produce the beat.

The vocals and lyrics just make you feel weird about people with AIDS, since some will continue to have sex to spread the disease to as many as possible sadly.

Overall, greatly saddening kind of song I think.

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You impress me

There really isn't much good hip-hop on NG, a lot of it has terrible mic quality or just a bad rapper voice, but you really do it well.

Your lyrics are very varied, this time, what I caught of it anyway, as English isn't my main language.

Some people might downvote you for writing lyrics like this, and I'm not sure if I like how you somewhat play on writing lyrics that are shocking, but your beats are real good and your voice really works out. It's rough, dirty and fits the lyrics.

The track doesn't get tiring, and I really like the refrain, it's clear and has a nice tuny and beat to it.

Overall I can't find anything bad about this. I really enjoyed the use of, what was it, an ukulele, around 2.20. Really adds to it, and it's somethig new. The instruments you used are really cool. You're doing something new with the beat and backdrop for the rap.

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Nice!

Id say ya did a good job on this one! Creative! Thats what I like to see! 5d Keep up!

Klazik