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Law of Disorder 2

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Hi!

Yesterday (begun the day before yesterday), I made "Law of Disorder" (http://www.newgrounds.co m/audio/listen/430366), and today, I continued the work.
I tried to upload an icon for this, but I failed... http://3rlend.com/Yin Yang 2.gif here it is anyway.

I've spent so much time on this now... but I don't regret; this version is awesome in my ears, the ultimately perfect "Law of Disorder". What do you think?

I really hope you enjoy and like this!

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Highly dandy

Sounds like a really cool video game piece anyways. Kind of like something that you would hear for the first few levels of a strange adventure platform game. The beat has a really hopping feel to it as well.

The synth sounds very slow, pleasing, and light to me. The deep synth bass is pretty cool and kind of makes me think of bees making a beat together for the rest of the hive I guess. Like the weird sword like sounds I hear as well.

The drums have a nice rhythm. Really like the wet bass kick they have. Double synth use later is pretty sweet.

Overall, wickedly nice.

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ErlendHL responds:

Thanks :D

Very active

It's always good to see someone go back and improve on their work. This is a pretty good one, it doesn't get long or repetitive like most 5+ min tracks I've heard.

Synth near the beginning is a little piercing (I like to turn up my volume while reviewing), a bit high pitched for my liking. I like your drum line, it sounds really simple but it's always way harder to make a good one than anyone thinks. The rapid synth you used for the main melody gives a real sense of vitality to this piece.

All it's missing, I think, are a few more parts. It feels a little empty near the end, with only 1-2 instruments playing. I always go for the grand, orchestral feel if possible. Sounds good, but could be better with more harmony parts, IMO.

Great job on this one, keep up the good work!

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ErlendHL responds:

Thank you for the feedback! In FL Studio I increased the tempo from 180 to 200 after uploading this, and it felt much better. (Maybe I should upload a Law of Disorder 2 (Revised)? I did turn up the bass volume a little too). For the piercing synth at the beginning, I actually warned about that in the #1 :P but I can't really expect that people read that description. As for the "empty" ending, I made it like this so it fits the beginning perfectly :) at least it did in FL Studio. Anyway I always appreciate reviews, helping a lot!

Oh yeah!

Contrary to the guy below me, I think this trumps the original one. I really love this!
The variations from the original you've made are awesome!

ErlendHL responds:

Thank you :D I agree that this is better than the first one :)

meh, Ok I guess

Sounds similar to the first one, although you did have some variation in the middle, was hoping for a different kind of intro, something to keep me hooked eh. I downloaded the first one lol, I like that one better haha. This isn't bad, but if I hadn't heard the first one i'd give this one a much higher score. 4/5 from me, still nice. Check mine, "Too Drunk to care".

ErlendHL responds:

Yeah they say they don't like the intro, I don't get why, but there must be a reason. Thanks for feedback, I always appreciate that, and keep all in mind.
Will check! ;)

Well composed

Not a bad track. I see where the title comes from.

My main issue is that it sounds a bit shallow. There is quite a lot going on, but in a track like this, it's always nice to have something thick to back it up, like synths playing in the back, throughout the track, ambient noises, something like that. I loved the melody of the synths, it's very intricate, feels all over the place and progresses throughout the song.

The drums aren't bad, the rhythms and beats you cooked up were pretty good, but the samples you've used are not the best. Especially the snare sounds fairly bad.

The track seems to drag out juuust a tad as well. At least the beginning is really slow. I love the sound the synths have at around 3.30. Feels like Daft Punk for a moment there :P

Really liked the outro and ending, just right ending to the track.

ErlendHL responds:

Thank you for the review! You're a great reviewer! :D I will keep your feedback in mind next time I make a song =)
I will try to find better samples (free...), and maybe experiment with having something "deep" beneath everything else.
Btw. norwegian WOOH!

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Score
4.40 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 29, 2011
3:04 PM EDT
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
6.1 MB
5 min 18 sec

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