Enjoyable

So first off, the transition at about 5:10 was... Sudden. I really enjoy the song, and the various themes are great to just relax to. I enjoy how much is going on because it's not chaotic, it's harmonious. I loved all of it so it's hard to focus on a particular part I liked more than the others. You already mentioned the volume thing, but you may want to tweak the stock piano a bit. I personally think this would sound much better on a concert piano with a slight echo, especially because this is mostly just the piano. I do enjoy how rich the piano sounds though, I just think the slight echo of a concert hall would do wonders for this. Other than that, I've got nothing. It's a great song, and I'm going to look at your other compositions. Great job mate!

Even though it's 10 minutes long, it's amazing.

Very good. I'm glad I found you. ^ ^
It's very well sounding to me and I can tell you worked hard on it.

Oh and thanks, I use a program called Banned Story to make my logos. :3

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From what you wrote i gues you are using Fruity Loops ???