Sounds a lot...

Sounds like vitalics "Polka" something in the beggining(dunt remember the full name :/)
Great song!

Great!

Could I use this in an animation? Only with your permission, (PM) me if it is alright with you.

Haha i love it!

its like this ambient tune that fits in while ur studying at midnight, HARD CORE STUDYING.
well im not rly studying, im on newgrounds audio.. procrastinating :D

keep up the good work, i want to hear moar frum u!

Great Consentration!

Has great atmosphere and sound... Love teh drums! ^_^ A Little repetetive but the rest is great!

I've reached my conclusion.

You and SJ need to collab for sure. That kid's sick with the basslines and the beats, but you have a great handle on melodies that his songs tend to lack. Not to repeat what's already been said, but this song's weakness is that it never really hits very hard. You've developed it quite well, but the instrumentation just needs a little more work (to give it that extra punch). I'm tempted to suggest sidechaining the kick and bass (at 1:08), but I think that would make it duck out too much. I can also hear a few crescendos here and there, but they're not extreme enough to really emphasize the impact. I guess the best way to sum up my suggestions is to say, "More." Do what you did, but do it more :P Also, Rave4Yourself made a good point. Peppering in some effects here and there always adds a good bit of flavor to a song.

Overall, very nice concept. Spot on with the liquid feel. If you sit down and tweak this a little more, you could have a great tune on your hands. 3/5 7/10

Oh, and pretty please check out my stuff. It's nothing special, but I can't get better without feedback.