Not bad.

Just flesh it out more, not a bad melody, but its not good enough of a melody to carry the song from beggining to end, not a bad track and sometimes repetitive loops work very well. This song could use some drops, build ups and variations tho.

Very nicely done!

Great melody! It started a little too abruptly in my opinion, but besides that I enjoyed listening to it very much! Good job! Very catchy, I like that a lot. A definite download from me!